War is like a typhoon barging through houses,
Every single day.
War is like a dog barking the
Mail man away.
War is like a bird,
Shot from out a tree,
War is like hailstones falling instantly,
So why can't we just set the innocent free?
Peace is like a blossom,
Falling from a tree,
So lets sit down and,
Have a piping cup of tea.
Peace is like a bird,
Flying fast away,
Lets hope our world,
Is like this every day.
By Jamie Sims
Copper Class
Year Five
Whittingham Primary School
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